Poem: It needs you!

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It needs you!

Surrounded by solitariness,
Glimpse of our eyes, the Homeland,
No one so cruelly Betrays,
Its charming airs,
Nor its attractive beauty,
And yet it remains in wistfulness,
For the people marched since long,
Oh beloved fellows!
Come again and look it,
What days and nights are, it does not know,
And still it feels lovely when you sleep and walk on its lap!
Homeland raises you and relaxes you!
All that it needs is your loyalty!
 
Troubled inner self

What can I say when it comes to take
Ahold of my motives and decisions it shapes
Looking this way and that
Eyes be a shifting
So fast scanning left to right
Feel as if the world is shaking
Hands soaking wet yet thirsty
And feeling weak
Knees they tremble
can’t even feel my feet
Get it together telling myself
Boy best weather the weather
So straighten on up
crack my neck and
Come back to us
Come back to us
Eyes finally open and I’m under a bus
 
Dwafnoy135 said:
Troubled inner self

What can I say when it comes to take
Ahold of my motives and decisions it shapes
Looking this way and that
Eyes be a shifting
So fast scanning left to right
Feel as if the world is shaking
Hands soaking wet yet thirsty
And feeling weak
Knees they tremble
can’t even feel my feet
Get it together telling myself
Boy best weather the weather
So straighten on up
crack my neck and
Come back to us
Come back to us
Eyes finally open and I’m under a bus
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Nice one
 
Unluckybolte said:
It needs you!

Surrounded by solitariness,
Glimpse of our eyes, the Homeland,
No one so cruelly Betrays,
Its charming airs,
Nor its attractive beauty,
And yet it remains in wistfulness,
For the people marched since long,
Oh beloved fellows!
Come again and look it,
What days and nights are, it does not know,
And still it feels lovely when you sleep and walk on its lap!
Homeland raises you and relaxes you!
All that it needs is your loyalty!
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Beautiful present, future and past! :)This fantasy is more like a belief
 
My longest friend

Brilliant and white lights full of glare
I stare into this physical uneasy space
I yearn to return tucked away in a place
That place from where this radiant restraint
Can’t make it in oh no I know it’s too late to be unborn again degrees dropping off like I’m gonna freeze look what you’ve done
Focus in on focusing breathe of life while feeling warmth from the sun now settling in the new world shows me for the first time my friend stay with always friends to the end and as the day progresses it’s back and forth who’s taller than can hide for to long the sun will draw him out even though he is the slyest like a vampire out in the sun would be forced to walk behind us well now you’ve met my longest friend gone at night but back tomorrow


Chad Price (dwafnoy135)
 
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